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Woo! V (not calling her by her original name) redesign, also some thoughts about her in the main series and in my rewrite (I’ll post about it at some point).

So I don’t really like her in the main series, she’s fine but her whole personality revolving around Charlie is…weird. It feels codependent and really one-sided? There isn’t much that I can about her as a character because her character is “Charlie’s girlfriend.” I preferred her in the pilot, as much her writing wasn’t perfect. And the reveal of her being an angel meant fucking nothing. The drama between her and Charlie lasted for one episode and then in one episode she was joking about being an angel.

In my rewrite she was a Salvadoran weapons dealers, she died in 2011 at like…25-29. Choose which one you the best. She got send to hell for killing a client out of rage then killing herself out of guilt. Very upbeat I’m aware. She met Charlie while roaming the streets of hell right after an extermination searching for angelic weapons, she and Carmilla were enemies at some point but then just became rivals because V did not have NEARLY as much power as Carmilla (she was in the industry for about…10 years? Give or take a couple years) . V was the main reason she started the hotel, lost sinners who fucked but in the end didn’t deserve eternal damnation. She isn’t FULLY invested in the idea of redemption but she doesn’t quite think it’s impossible. Also she can’t fly very well by the way. She’s trying is basically the story of her life in both the real world and in hell. She’s a moth because they represent change! Also because the idea of her being weirdly short is kinda funny to me. She can pick up Charlie in one hand.

!!DISCLAIMER!!

If you don't like Hazbin Hotel, is fine, you don't need to read this post or interact, toxicity will not be accepted even if you don't like the show or the creator. Harassing fans is unacceptable. This is both a rant and an announcement of a future project, please be respectful in your comments to both fans and critics.

A while ago I filtered the Hazbin Hotel tag because of the toxicity of both fans and haters.

For starters, know that YES, I like Helluva Boss (but only a little), and Hazbin Hotel was ok, both shows just have problems and issues.

I don't want to touch on the behind-the-scenes issues because, honestly, I have trust issues because of the five hundred accusations made against Vivzpop, most of which ended up being false, or exaggerations or pure misinformation!

So sorry it gets to the point where I just can't trust any accusations made against her! But this isn't about that, this is just to make it clear why I'm making this post. The real reason for this post is that I'm wanting to do a reimagining/rewrite of Hazbin Hotel (and MAYBE Helluva Boss!) not because I think the show is trashy, far from it.

I like the show and its concepts, I just think the show has a lot of wasted potential. Plus I just want to do this for fun, I like Vivzpop's style and some of her designs, I just think her writing deserves some work. But before I start, I need a theme.

I know that officially the show has a circus theme, but another artist is already using this motif for their rewrite, I want something different! It can be anything that has not already been used, this applies to hell, deadly sins and heaven too! What theme will my version of HH have?

You can comment and I will make a pull for everyone to vote on which ideas will be used for the rewrite. This will be important working on the designs and world, I already have some ideas for the characters, plot and lore.

Please be creative but also respectful.

Miss Midnight!

AHEMMMM totally didn't forget tumblr exists.. yep. working on trying out lineless art, i love it so far! very fun stuff!

this is Miss Midnight! She's a peacock-themed Goetia who loves the night sky. and red wine.

Miss midnight is Stella's good friend and like an aunt to Octavia, but doesn't visit all that much. She's an observer and likes to watch everyone fight at events.

(some say she even starts the fights between the others. she refuses to comment on this).

she's a design i recieved for free from Dazelvel -- i gave her a small redesign and the art above is my own, however

alastor's family!

This IS canon for my rewrite, btw. reasoning is it would be funny

Parents: Mono-bro and Rainessa

Kids in order of oldest to youngest (size): Radioactive; Night skye; Piss bucket, Alastor, and Orange (triplets); Lav; And little Jimmy, the misfit

Niffty the cleaning demon!

I was not expecting to finish her so fast, consedering the fact that Alastor was a pain in the ass.

Okay for her, I went for a more more brown and red for her pallet and Honestly it look perfect for her, the hair I inspired it by the hairstyles in the 20's/30's (since I changed her death date to the same as Alastor, 1933) but I put a bit of cuteness to it, her side bangs were inspired by the Angel dust redesign by lovesart23.

for her form I went for a bug, not any bug in particular but If she would be a real bug would be 100% a praying mantis.

She is almost like original niffy personality wise but she more "sane" and can think of other things besides murder.

I make niffty height be almost the same as vaggie, she just a little shorter, since I didn't want o maker her extremly childish like, just out of the box.

She have 4 arms for multi-tasking, just like when she was alive, since well she's the only maid for that woundbungus hotel.

because of the way she died, kiling herself eating cleaning product, her abdomen and inside of her tail? is very soft, it has this lava lamp effect (almost like beelzebub from HB) and is her greatest weakness, but luckly she is fast enough to at least come alive from a fight.

also she has a venom in both her saliva and in the end of her tail and that is what is always coming out of her mouth.

the eyes on her tiara are actually eyes attached to it and it hurts when someone take them by force or something happen and they are always drying up so she always carrys a eyedrop.

in her casual wear I tried to make the pallet close to the original withou making it extremely saturaded.

her work uniform is just one of her dark dresses, since I don't see her using black just some color dark enough, the fist part of the appron is to represent the morningstar's symbol, a apple with three seed each one representing charlie, lucifer and lilith.

(SPOILER for the fic ahead) he died when she and Alastor had 39 years and they are twin brothers.

Ok enough about her design, lets go to the exicinting part, her storie.

!!WARNING: GORE, BLOOD (obviously), decpiction of self hatred, manipulation!!

when alive Niffty or better Nora was married to a detective, a hard-working one, she was happy at least even if her husband was always in some kind of trouble or working or both.

but as times goes on she noticed how her friends and neighbours were happy because of their children, she always have the dream of being a mother but unfortunately she coun't get pregnant by any means they tried EVERTHING but it never worked, her husband at one point suggested they adopt but she refuse to belive that she coun't be a mother but everyone could.

she could not accept it, but one day when she was cleaning the dishes as always her twin-brother Alastor, it was not strange since they were basically attached to the hip, but this time her brother was acting a little strange, his sweet smile now a nervous one, his usual casual and calm posture now a little hunched over, he was acting almost like a deer that was ruining from a hunter. and of course she would ask about it:

"Are you okay? you seem a little... err..." she asked while Alastor passed trought the door and inside her home.

Alastor look at the front windows and shut them "Nervous?"

"this would be a understanment" Niffty said with a tick of her tounge at the end.

"I need to ask you something"

Niffty walk closer to him "Of course, anything for my little brother" she gave him a little hug while messing a little with his hair, even if they were the same height and age, she always treated him like a younger brother just to spite him.

sighing a now nervous-wreck Alastor "this is not the right time for your jokes Nora"

Niffty let go of him, holding his shoulders "what do you need?"

and then that when Alastor started explaining to her that he found a voodo book were he could do anything! with it, control people like little puppets, distort his voice and on and on, Niffty of course didn't belive her brother about this book, he always was attraced to this type of thing and sometimes so much that he could spent months talking about a new thing he found about magic, Niffty never belive him but she was always there to support him, but this time she belived that her brother got absolutely isane, just look at his state!

body hunched over, a uneving smile while speak that reminded her of his smile when he speak about this topic but more... afraid almost like at any moment something will show up and-

"Anyway I need you to sabbotage your husband's case"

"why? I mean is not like you killed someone and burried them in your garden!" she laughed, a strained one to try and cheer him up! but he didn't laugh, he just stared at her and a moment passes with neither of them speaking just staring at each other.

"did you?"

he didn't needed to respond for her to understand that her own brother killed someone, her own fucking brother! of all people!

"calm down I won't kill you" Alastor reassured her when noticing her now pinched brows while understanding that him did something so terrible to a person.

"Why? why I FUCKING SHOULD HE-"

"I cou- can make you have a child" Alastor cut her off, licking his lips he continued "with this power I can make everything you and I want to come true, of course this comes with a prize, but either way if you help me you could finally have the family you always wanted."

Niffty rubs her facer with her hands while trying to drink it all up, if she help Alastor she could finally have the perfect family, all her problems would be gone! her friends and neighours coun't gossip about how wortless she was as a wife and her husband would love her even more!

Looking at Alastor she see terror but also hope with his words, even if she didn't belived in magic she coun't lose this precious chance.

"what I need to do?"

Months passed by with a lot of people disapiring, Alastor thing of course, while Niffy's husband is trying to solve this case, he is a mess but it was only temporary, of course making a baby out of magic would be difficult so she only did what was necessary for her husband not discover that the person comitting this crimes was his brother-in-law and ruin their chance of being a family.

because her husband was so ungluffed by this case he ocasonally would bring some documents that said about the case itself, even if the most people Alastor killed was still disappered some of them have at least their bodies or at least part of them, with each time alastor killed and gained more power more and more wreckless he was becoming, with each victim having at best a grossome death, changing the papers with ones that have wrong information, destroying other and telling her husband that he did not bring that document to their house by forgetting at the police station, she always acted how someone would be afraid at being the next victim, since well she is the perfect one.

  but one day her husband, half covered in blood, not sure if his or from another person or both confronted her about the documents, demanding to know why she is doing this when she knows that this a serious case and one that would make them have a better life. While arguing Niffty acidentally spills out that Alastor is the killer and that he just "helping them in a difficult time" her husband is mad because he can't understand that she's only doing this for them! that Alastor is helping them archive their dream of having a family but he didn't understand that.

Her husband just sighs "I know, but I was hoping fucking hoping that MY OWN WIFE woun't help her INSANE BROTHER AND THAT'S WAS JUST MY MIND FUCKING WITH ME!!" he walks closer to her "but no" he laugh in this part "all this time you knew, you just din't knew, you HELPED HER FUCKING MURDERER OF A BROTHER while I was going nuts trying to kept us both SAFE"

at this moment he's pratically extremly closer to her, threatining, scared Niffy picks the knife that she was using to do the dinner and stabs him one time, two time, three, four... at this point she dosen't know, trapped in this cyclic state of stabing her husb- a idiot's dead body, when finally she stops, she goes to the cabinet with her face, dress and kitchen floor full of blood bu she didn't care, she picked all cleaning products and start chungin'it down her throat if she's not gonna have a happy family then she is not supposed to be even alive anymore.

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A/n: this is my first time making a fic, so is not the best but I hope it get the point across, for the other character for the re-write I will try and make the same thing, explain their design and after that their backstory, for husk I will not gonna do his life backstory just saying what he did to be in hell and all that but the main thing will be his overlord backstory, in case someone want to see the re-write It's not needed seeing ALL backstory from the characters.

Charlie M. the princess of hell

Ok I had her finished some days ago but for some reason I didn't posted them - probably because I forgot about it - she was a little difficult to make - not so difficult than alastor because no one can be as difficult as that bitch 1 eyed radio-deer - especially because I wanted to maker her a little different from the rest.

 Also I should've already made a post or put in my other redesigns but my rewrite I will be going in a different path for the story since the rewrite is not an "I will make hazbin hotel better because vivizepop made it shitty" but an "what if was me that maded hazbin hotel" is just for made it clear of the why I changed Charlie, and probably other character, so much.

In here charlie is litterally a Doll demon, made by Lucifer as a present and symbol of the love of lilith and him, the way she grew, from a child at her current form was close from I think emily from the fnaf books, where she was a robot and her dad had made each stage of a normal human growing but instead of wires and cables she is made from a resistent unamed material and MAGIC~

Since I wanted to make her have more apple theme I made her hair green and she now have a paint job that looks like guess what? exactly! an apple.

I tried to make her style a little bit more regal since I changed charlie's personality a LOT, not because her personality is not interesting or anything, is the way that they maded her a little childish sometimes and I understand that the point of her character is to be a subversion of a person would think of a princess of hell but still it bugged me sometimes, idk how to explain exactly.

So she is a more serious person (doll?) since she know that hell is not a easy child's play, but still she's worried by her people, worried just like her mother, she takes pride for understanding everything about anything, well almost because the only thing that she will never understand are fellings and because of that every time someone mentions that she don't understand everything, she will prove them wrong, after all she need is perfect.

And the reason that she re-opended the Hotel is because of this said pride, a long time ago when Lucifer was hoping that heaven would at least make a expection for second chances with their favorite creation, since he has still with the naive mentality, so he made the "Happy Hotel" but Heaven didn't give them a second chance so he just scrapped the ideia and put in his failed project gabinet, that is until millenias later Charlie found the archives of it and she bring it to her father asking about it, since she liked to know what Lucifer did or was doing in his work shop even if the failed projetcs, she was interested to know the why so she would never do this mistakes that the other projects did and sometimes she make the failed projects a sucessfull one.

so when lucifer said that the project was just a "unfixable project" she take that as a challeng and started the hotel to prove her dad wrong.

and Vaggie with razzle and dazzle is there to make sure that this come true.

some silly little fun facts about this Charlie:

+ she can change her form and she have a wardrobe full of pieces, just like G3 frankie, rangin from hands, to eyes, to whole heads and so on, she normally don't change that much only if she visiting other rings. + she and Lucifer tend to give apple/duck related pet names, Lucifer more than Charlie because she don't open up so easily but still. + she call Vaggie "Crispin" (the name of the green apple) or when she is trying to be more romantic "The light I would go wihout second trought" + she makes silly little fanfics about her and Vaggie (her gf), like what they woul be like if they're in a fairytale or a mafia romantic novel at night. + she likes to sometimes to buy some snacks on cannibal town. she have a WHOLE ROOM with plushies and all kinds of cute/comforting stuff just for her, sometimes she brings Vaggie when she's sad because Charlie dosen't know what to do.

Divider by @astralnymphh.

Vaggie oh vaggie

her redesign is by far one of my favorites, (especially the hair and colors) so for her I kinda like her original design, minus the hair, but either way I wanted to play a little with her.

I put her pallet in a more blue/purple tone to show that she dosen't originate from hell just like the other do, (also inspired by the indian lily moth) I put scars on her for obvious reasons and the little ones in her arms are not scars from self-harm and just from some sinners that she killed when she was a exorcist.

she still don't have a right eye I just made it a swirl instead of nothing because it look more cool this way.

I made her hair shorted for practicality and to look more like a little moth, the "eyes" is only in the inner side of her hair and it dosen't matter if the hair become longer or shorter, they always will be there.

when I said that her pallet is more blue/purple it dosen't apply for her work uniform, but still I wanted to make more darker to make her gold accents pop a lot more, originally I wanted to make her gold accents be silver instead but it didn't work out.

her casual one is basically her pilot one but with a bellbottom pants because I love this type of pants.

her personality is still the same but I made her a little more scared of her secret coming out, because this charlie even if she is neutral to just annoyed about the exorcists she really hates when someone tries to make her a foul.

the only thing I changed about her backstory is that she didn't let the sinner escape on purpose but was a acidentall one, since I found strange that she would let a sinner live (even if is a child) on purpose, And the sinner managed to take her eye out and escape resulting in other exorcists being exremely injured afterwards and Lute resolved it from the root of the problem, that being vaggie;

Lute let vaggie live but only bearly.

after Lute leave with the other exorcists, Charlie while searching to see if any exorcits is still in hell just about to attack again, in a alley she found vaggie and she picks her up to heal her, since Charlie belive is just another sinner that some exorcits didn't bother to see if is really dead.

she dosen't use her angelic spear since it was broken by lute, so she just use one fro the royal family

a fun fact about this Vaggie:

even if she's not a real moth sinner, she still has the habit to sometimes just eat or chew on random soft things (a little like the pica disorder but since I don't understand this disorder very much, for now she dosen't have it)

I didn't have so much trought to make her more little fun facts, sorry.

this one is my rewritten version of charlie, her name now is Cisic Royal Pride, I change her name because she is meant to be the representation of perfection so what's more perfect than a palindrome, I tried not to change it too much.

this two are me figuring out the hair, face shape and colors so I will not fall into the pit from before.

I really like the first one ngl.

now this one is just me figuring out her design as a whole, I like this, really like this, I will just alter some details and stuff.

so as you can see she have a peacock veil in her clothes, that I will change later, but why? well is simple, peacocks can be associated with pride and since I wanted to give my designs my own twist with the mythos and the concept of a good place and a bad place I decided to put peacock elements on her.

she's more peacock inspired than a peacock demon but her more infernal form is basically a purple peacock with various eyes.

and the other deadly virtues/deadly sins will be also inspired by the animals that represents them and of course that the animals that represents them changes over time so some will have more than one animal *cof* *cof* mammon *cof* *cof*

Idk how tf I will make his design tbh.

And also the deadly sins and other demons that are nobility in hell, are just close to the deadly virtudes or are their childs will have flowers that represent the deadly virtude in their designs! and even tho my heaven is the one that is suppose to have this flowers symbolisms, wich they have, in hell will be their dried versions or a hellshi version of them so it will not look like heaven :D

also I thinking of making a proper blog for the after tale (my hazbin hotel rewrite) but I don't know if you all will like it so...

just to remenber everyone and warn to those who don't know, my hazbin hotel rewrite is for pure fun, I do not claim I making it a gazillion% better than the og, I simply making my own version of it so I can train my writting and character design and also show it to anyone interested in.

And the blog was created!

as well as the after tale logo!

this one is my rewritten version of charlie, her name now is Cisic Royal Pride, I change her name because she is meant to be the representation of perfection so what's more perfect than a palindrome, I tried not to change it too much.

this two are me figuring out the hair, face shape and colors so I will not fall into the pit from before.

I really like the first one ngl.

now this one is just me figuring out her design as a whole, I like this, really like this, I will just alter some details and stuff.

so as you can see she have a peacock veil in her clothes, that I will change later, but why? well is simple, peacocks can be associated with pride and since I wanted to give my designs my own twist with the mythos and the concept of a good place and a bad place I decided to put peacock elements on her.

she's more peacock inspired than a peacock demon but her more infernal form is basically a purple peacock with various eyes.

and the other deadly virtues/deadly sins will be also inspired by the animals that represents them and of course that the animals that represents them changes over time so some will have more than one animal *cof* *cof* mammon *cof* *cof*

Idk how tf I will make his design tbh.

And also the deadly sins and other demons that are nobility in hell, are just close to the deadly virtudes or are their childs will have flowers that represent the deadly virtude in their designs! and even tho my heaven is the one that is suppose to have this flowers symbolisms, wich they have, in hell will be their dried versions or a hellshi version of them so it will not look like heaven :D

also I thinking of making a proper blog for the after tale (my hazbin hotel rewrite) but I don't know if you all will like it so...

just to remenber everyone and warn to those who don't know, my hazbin hotel rewrite is for pure fun, I do not claim I making it a gazillion% better than the og, I simply making my own version of it so I can train my writting and character design and also show it to anyone interested in.

;)

TaT Worldbuilding: Hell's map

yep I changed the map, in the og the map was simple and that's not a bad thing at all.

so why I change it? why not? yes it gave me more work to do but it is fun to make it.

I did not make a visual thing for it yet ;/

here hell's located in the center of the earth, what? you throught that earth had a core? pfft, of course it dosen't have! that's just a pretty lie that we told you all, well as I was saying Hell is in the center of the earth, more expecific in a roottten dead corpse of a titan, in 7 places of it has the Deadly virtudes realms where each Virtude lives with its subordinates. Each realm will have its own post talking more in depht about it but I will sumarize some things.

also each Virtude has a theme based around a type of art. mostly because I think it would be more freeing to make types of art instead of circus act.

let's start from the top.

Head: Pride, the place where hell's king know as Lucifer a.k.a the devil pulling the puppeter strings lives with his family and one of the most rich (besides Greed) and difficult places to live mostly because of Pride biome, since is a watery one, normally in the head is where is locaded the brain and a liquid that makes our brains stay in place in all times, is not more watery, or acid, than Gluttony but it has a cold tempeature because of it, basically england. The Pride Deadly Virtude type of art is wood carving.

 Throat: Envy, Behemoth a.k.a opps daisy your idea was stolen! is its Deadly Virtude alongside their spouse Amaymon, one of the realms where you will see everything you want to be but you can’t not, its biome is ventous making walking by foot a little harder if you só happen to be weak in the knees easily. The Envy Deadly Virtude type of art is fashion.  

Right arm: Wrath, Amon a.k.a old and mr. new techonology is bad, is Wrath Deadly Virtude, Wrath is the most infertile place for any plants althrought the realm is a little behind in somethings but it compensates by being the biggest producer of weapons, tools or anything that your heart desire. The Wrath Deadly Virtude type of art is forging.

 Left arm: Greed, Mammon a.k.a the most paranoic being in existence and Lucifer’s “bestfriend”, is Greed Deadly Virtude alongside his paranoia, Greed Unlike its arm siblings, wrath, greed is a largely underground kingdom and because of this everything is made of the muscles and bones already existing in the body, its method of transportation is subways and it is also called “the hidden kingdom” since its houses, buildings, markets and so on seem non-existent to someone who is not from greed but you just need to take a closer look to see that’s not true. The Greed Deadly Virtude type of art is paintings.

 Lungs: Sloth, Ataroth a.k.a Hell’s most talented musician or the only pacifist in hell, is Sloth Deadly Virtude alongside Azazel a.k.a Hell strategist, they’re not married or in any romantic relationship they just rule together, if you think that Envy is ventuos get ready to see the Sloth realm where everything is way to slow or way to fast, nobody should live here but strangely enough demons seem strangely drawn to it, the Sloth realm have a almost dreamlike peacefulness even when in days where the air don’t seem to spare no one Sloth still have this pull to it, nobody seem to know why and the mist dosen’t help either. The Sloth Deadly Virtude type of art is music.

 Stomach: Gluttony, Beelzebub a.k.a the og mom, the second temptor of Eve and the first temptor of Adam, is Gluttony Deadly Virtude alongside their spouse Antonio G. and their little child Beelicious G. Altrought here every demon is Beelzebub child in her eyes, you have to be extra cautious where you step since in any moment the floor will become ACID! But don’t be too cautious since you still didn’t eat that giant strawberry chocolate cake you had buy, The Gluttony Deadly Virtude type of art is confectionery.

 Hips: Lust, Asmodeus a.k.a the first temptor of Eve, mr. spouse stealing and the most hopeless romantic in existence is Lust Deadly Virtude alongside his loneliness, It seems like it's almost always night, the perfect time for a fun time and jewels is like breathing in here, meaning that the kingdom of lust is always fighting with the other kingdoms. (especially envy and greed) The Lust Deadly Virtude type of art is body painting.

Thanks, i at least put effort in dis redesign than Vivziepoop.

What do you think?

I decided to make Ozzie a Ars Goetia demon, not Asmodeus, because he being Asmodeus disturbes me now af. I gave him a sexy outfit that made him confortable, or not.

That’s pretty cool of you made that one

guys what if angel dust, as a natural part of his healing journey, got a little bit fat

what if, in the struggle of weaning himself off drug addiction, indulged in food to cope, at first maybe a little too much, but eventually finds a relatively healthy and stable weight and metabolism

what if he relishes in just being able to finally enjoy food without counting calories or purging so he can stay absurdly lean all the time

what if he becomes less antsy and irritable because hes not living off an empty stomach 70% of the time

what if he feels comfortable looking like that because his body is different now and it makes it easier to mentally seperate himself from the sex object he used to see himself as

wouldn't that be kinda neat?

he can even go back to being skinny, just a more reasonable amount of skinny, a more dense, even muscular build

too bad vivzies to pussy to "ruin" one of her precious twinks like that

Holy shit, everything about this is incredible! From the artwork to the writing to the sheer horror of it all, reading this was a really enjoyable experience. And I kept scrolling back up just to get another look at the incredible art! Amazing job! ♡♡♡

“Excuse me sir! There must someone you’ve confused me for!”

Having Angel withdrawal again sorry guys :/ its time for some uhh… prologue stuff?? I think thats right. Anyway! As I mentioned in this lovely post, when sinners die the time it takes for them to wake up in hell and where they wake up depends on how they died. So for Angels case his body was formed in hell in a hospital bed cause thats where he died so theres like fibres and metal in his body from being formed around a hospital bed! This is also going to go into how regenerating and how injuries work so get ready! Basically whatever your body was originally formed and made out of regenerates eventually, you can have scars if theyre really big (uncommon since the injury usually kills you) but if you die again in hell they go away. Angel gets injured quite a lot and none of these injuries are permanent. That isn’t to say you can heal by killing yourself though! If you do die while injured there may actually be lasting complications since bodies in hell are typically made to regenerate while gravely wounded. Its kind of like a fucked up computer so if you have a broken leg and die by say snapping your neck the body may get confused and regenerate bones and such incorrectly. Or it may not! Its hell who knows! Ill likely figure out a more concrete plan and way that it works but at the moment I enjoy this aspect of hell to not have a random cheat code and instead include some body horror. Its hell so like some stuff is probably confusing right??

Back to Angel, later on around season 1 in the rewrite he also has throat surgery to remove his deformed inner fangs and those DO actually stay gone because certain hospitals in hell (usually expensive ones) have tools from sloth that have been permitted by Lucifer. Similar to how Stolas got that lust portal gem or whatever. Angels body wasn’t supposed to form like that and this is a common thing to happen with sinners that die “long-term” and that sounds confusing but it really just means sinners that die in comatose-esque ways like Angel. His body was dying over the course of months (December to March to be exact) so parts of his body formed over complicated or were underdeveloped like the aforementioned fangs (that were originally meant to form inside of his mouth and not his throat) that would randomly bare themselves and stab his own throat, paralyzing Angel temporarily. Other examples would be parts of his legs and smaller stomach.

This is the surgery Angel got by the way (expenses covered by Velvette but thats a whole other plot line)

On top of this I also wanted to draw Angel’s old markings (at least one of them). Prior to Valentino, Angel looked much similar marking-wise to his original comic designs where he was more purple and yellow with all the fun skulls and stripes. Though, with how contracts work in my rewrite, Angel loses the markings and they change into hearts after his contract and cannot return to normal after his contract is terminated. The same is true for Husker and Niffty. This whole piece is really just supposed to capture to horror of waking up after being comatose and you’re suddenly not yourself anymore and also not where you were for the past months and your entire anatomy is changed. Can you imagine waking up without bones??? In 1947??? Id have a breakdown personally!

I also wanted to use green for that sick gross feeling. Kind of the dread you feel before throwing up, but also to represent Angel’s later feelings of envy that I was unable to present in his design. I really like pink characters in green atmospheres if you can’t tell. If I think of more stuff to add to this post I will, but for now it’s just a lot of lore. Hopefully you all enjoy it!

I've had an HH rewrite in my head for a while, and I am finally trying to organize it (which will take time b/c my thoughts are all over the place) so I can post it here. I'm very excited! I have so many ideas!