You Werent Rude At All, Im Actually Impressed And Glad To Have Someone Bring A Detailed Perspective About

You weren’t rude at all, I’m actually impressed and glad to have someone bring a detailed perspective about this!

I think that Sumire was used to relying on Kasumi all the time because Kasumi chose to take the role of being the older sibling a bit too far. Perhaps Kasumi herself didn’t notice Sumire’s inferiority complex or depression or other negative feelings inside and thought teasing was harmless. Who knows? But it’s understandable that Kasumi couldn’t be a saint like Sumire painted her to be. I think it might’ve gotten to the point where Sumire only knows how to overly depend on someone who wouldn’t hesitate to help out of kindness, specifically Joker, as an unconscious choice of “I need someone who wouldn’t hesitate to help me or be around for anything I’d need” as a sort of resemblance to Kasumi. A Pick-Me-Up kinda thing or a cushion to fall on.

It could’ve been because she’s never tried being independent because she thought Maybe she relied on Kasumi more so than her parents? Maybe Sumire has always known to being overly dependent and she prefers to do so, and it could be the same way with the real Kasumi when she acts as her sister or it’s merely an unconscious gesture. She seems to have lacked any drive for independency and individuality in the past since she’d use Kasumi like a shield or a pillar to avoid anything that would teeter her.

But the thing about Sumire is that she’ll have this big scene where she says she has stopped being helpless yet sort reverts back to the same pattern. And while humans tend to go back on old habits, those who are willing for change try and occasionally falter but still grow. It’s human. But Sumire doesn’t seem all that different from before. I’m not totally sure about this idea though. It could always be for another reason.

Regarding the phantom thieves using Sumire’s ideology, I have doubts on this. They wouldn’t need to take her into consideration since they’ve done similar things to letting their targets have time to recover themselves, like the reformation of the Palace Rulers in the first game. They never rushed the outcome of their heist success in changing hearts. Then again, the thieves change hearts for the reason that their target’s desires and emotions are so out of control that they couldn’t change for themselves and are stuck in these states. So the thieves were left with no other option, their hands are tied to finding another method of means outside the Metaverse. The ideology of solving one’s own problems in the first game are shown through the target’s victims in the aftermath and more before Sumire even enters the picture more and mentions it. For example: Mishima and Shiho, and Joker’s confidants (including the thieves). The point of his emotional bonds with others is that although Joker helps them and impacts them, they are the ones themselves who strive for self betterment and the betterment of others in their lives.

These topics that could go any which way depending on each person’s opinions I think. Atlus leaves some things open for interpretation or ambiguous. But that’s my take for the most part. Thank you for your insight.

My Rants: Honest Opinions

My Problem With KaSumi|re Yoshizawa/Violet

Fandom(s): Persona 5: Royal

Summary: Yoshizawa rubbed me off the wrong way since the moment I saw her. I immediately got the sense of ‘Market Seller Waifu For Increase In Sales For Royal’ after seeing her unoriginal thief getup. And I’m unapologetic to admit that she’s my absolute LEAST favourite character despite the ridiculous amount of positive reviews she’s had after Persona 5 Royal’s release. And I couldn’t stop thinking about it after the Atlus announcement for Xbox and PC. Then I figured, I thought to finally expel these annoying thoughts in order to release my pent up frustration.

So here’s why.

Warnings: Spoilers for Persona 5: Royal.

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Or as I call her: the Mary Sue Waste of Space Doormat Kohai. Cause she’s like a Doormat character with a Senpai fetish. Because let’s face it, does anyone get called Senpai as much as Joker? No.

I know. I put her in my Entwined Hearts story but things will be different as the chapters progress.

The only time she really does anything in the real world is defend and help Joker when he is arrested, but ALL his confidants do that! They’re supposed to do those things after he deepens his bonds to max level, there is nothing new or unique about it with her!

A side note: I find it humorous that crossovers adding Yoshizawa just have to be emphasized with Royal and not simply Persona 5 even though Royal is Persona 5 in general.

Kasumi is a static character, Sumire is the flat.

Her very presence is a shoehorn. Her appearances never really feels natural. She just pops in and out whenever she wants. I would’ve honestly forgotten her if it wasn’t for the ridiculous amount of fans she has that just worships the ground she walks on or anything else she does. Which isn’t a whole lot.

Her looks are an uncreative and reusable mix of FeMC, Mitsuru, Yuko and from P3.

Overly attached to Joker because he’s pretty much the only person she wants to revolve around in her life. She hardly interacts or befriends anyone else. Her gymnastics club members, classmates, other schoolmates, her parents who barely show relevance to her personally, other honour students (there’s no way in hell she’s the only one), and the thieves. As Kasumi, for someone who acts like an extroverted socialite it doesn’t really make sense as to why she doesn’t. Like, talk to a single regular person at all.

And about the thieves; they, for some reason, blindly love her so much after only meeting, like, twice. They barely know her and have rarely interacted or hung out outside the Metaverse. She basically ignores their existence to have this weird honeymoon phase on Joker.

She does not contribute anything to the main plot except for 3rd Semester. Which is at the end of the game. Her first entrance to “save” Joker in Sae’s Palace was wasteful. He’s, not counting Mona, the most experienced fighter out of all the thieves. Joker did not need her help in any way shape or form. P5 vanilla proves that, he didn’t need any of the other thieves as backup when he was evading the Shadows. He’s the freaking main character! Joker’s supposed to have the spotlight for the player. It’s just a lazy introduction to a Mary Sue as a show of fan service beloved by everyone for anything she does or doesn’t do. And that gives the thieves a reason to have her for their “Hey, We Saved The World From Corruption By Taking Down a False God” party?

She rarely figure out the problems presented to her on her own. It’s mostly Joker doing it for her.

KaSumi/re’s social link for the first couple of ranks go the SAME route. You do a family friendly activity, she falls into her so called “slump”, you cheer her up, she promises to work harder than ever, and the cycle repeats to the point where it’s predictable and easy to gain her rank up. How is that interesting?

The same can be said for when she is back to being SUMIRE. Where after ONLY knowing her as Kasumi, you continue her confidant from where you left off. It would’ve made more sense if we were to start over her social link so we’d get to know Sumire properly (even if it’s already January but still). Yet we don’t.

There was nothing off about her being Kasumi in the first place that led to the indication that she wasn’t actually Kasumi. Her attitude stays the same, perky, polite, overly positive, being an airhead (That goes for Sumire too. Seriously, how does one take crappy code names as Appetite and Leotard into actual consideration? How do unused scenes like Akechi suspecting her as the Palace Ruler because of her association with said Palace being about one who craves attention and just let it slip by her?) her talk about her “younger” sister’s death just seemed like something to add for her backstory. Nothing really showed that anything was wrong in her happy go lucky world aside from the few interactions she has with Maruki. Which still hardly makes a difference. Though it didn’t matter if her reveal would’ve happened or not, Sumire just goes back to being the SAME person as when she first started. What were all those 120 hours of progress for..?!

Morgana wanting to recruit her then changing his mind because of Shido makes me deadpan. The thieves faced a perverted and abusive P.E. teacher, a manipulative and gaslighting artist, the freaking mafia, and a selfish and money-hungry CEO father! Everyone had their own lives on the line each! What makes Yoshizawa’s any different..?! I just don’t get it! Didn’t that cat say that powers in numbers is a good thing after recruiting Ann? That whole conversation after Maruki’s Palace was stupid. Because it meant nothing for the main story.

Her reason for awakening is weak and contradictory. Because, when voices of people who talk poorly of her, her motivation for awakening is that they spoke down on the dream she shares with her sister. This goes completely against P5’s themes and it doesn’t work. KaSumi/re never even cared about their opinions anyways, she even vocalizes this as a statement. And her potentially losing her honour student status was her own fault. Even with her second awakening being more meaningful, it still doesn’t justify having a “Spirit of Rebellion”.

Her thief outfit is nothing but a market seller for Royal. Atlus even admits it in their interviews. The only symbolism it has is that she admires Joker so much and sees him as a spitting image of rebellion that she replicates her attire to his, including keeping her Kasumi ponytail. Even Atlus admits this in their interviews that her outfit was just a market seller! The only thing original about it is the leotard because she’s a gymnast, but it’s so impractical. She might as well been wearing a swimsuit, it’d make no difference. And when she finally awakens as Sumire (though not really), her outfit stays the same, hair the same, Persona the same. There is no visible representation of Sumire showcasing individuality that separates her from Kasumi/re. Which is a clue to how she goes back to looking the same as when she was in the beginning. Character development what now? Violet is the same way, Kasumi with just a mask on.

Black just doesn’t seem like Yoshizawa’s colour palette. There’s no reason for wearing black when the only time she does wear it is her Shujin blazer and that’s it.Gymnasts don’t really wear plain black either; it’s usually with a flashy design that comes with dark and light colours, or one with a simpler look. Her leotard being plain black is too… simple? Purple works since she actually wore that for her gymnastics. Everyone somehow loves the inaccuracy of her in a sleeveless leotard that showcase exaggerated body that isn’t her at all, they seem to like using her just for their perverse entertainment, (then again pretty much every female fictional character is like that so this isn’t anything new or a big deal anymore, I don’t know, I can’t be bothered to give a crap knowing that the media does whatever it wants), when gymnasts always wear sleeves. This is just a notice I have over her costume.

Her showtime is weird. (Plus, why can’t Joker have showtime that gives him the spotlight?) So she jumps into his arms for a spin as he shoots down enemies, tosses her to make this strange performance with her deceased sister (does that mean she’s actually touching air and Kasumi is all in her head?), and has Joker twirl her into a dip. Just how deprived of his attention are you? Did Nintendo really have to give us the unnecessarily pointless scene of Yoshizawa’s dancing and her showtime as part of P5’s trailer of branching out to other consoles? Akechi’s showtime clip hardly balances that out considering it was short and at the end.

What was the whole point of that ridiculous dance cutscene of her and Joker? A shoehorn by Atlus as ship bait between the true star of the game and Trashy-zawa. Guess they’d go with any shoehorn to get people to continue talking about Royal.

Sumire’s backstory is just a recycle from the other girls’ story arcs. Especially Lavenza, who goes on to have an identity crisis herself where she is split into TWINS. I find that no body that I’ve seen has mentioned this. We didn’t need another twin story AGAIN.

There was also no purpose for Joker to be meeting her father. It only left the impression of a random encounter who you meet only once. Which is exactly what happened. What, is it so Yoshizawa would see something off-putting from Maruki’s Palace? That could’ve been done any other way or time.

Her connection to Cendrillon is off and strange. All the stories of Cinderella have many things in common: she’s a waif, she is looked down on by her household, verbally abused, put into forced labour, shown to be a genuine person, and is saved by a man who solves all her problems. All these bad things in Cinderella’s life happens TO her out of jealousy, spite, and cruelty. Sumire goes through none of that. She has a sister who cares about her, and parents that care about her, too. There is no ill mistreatment anywhere done TO her from when she was Sumire before Shujin. The thing she said about Kasumi making the decisions for her, like her clothes, is because Sumire lets her. She could’ve said anything at anytime and Kasumi would’ve listened. They’re siblings! Twins for crying out loud! They would’ve spent everything together knowing each other’s quirks, habits, and flaws. Yet Sumire puts the image that Kasumi is perfect in every way (Mary Sue) when she’s spent years with learning all about her twin. Sumire’s a Mary Sue for the fact that everything she does or doesn’t do is positively received no matter the situation. There’s also the fact that there doesn’t seem to be any ground reason as to why Sumire has an inferiority complex over her sister other than that Kasumi is considered the better gymnast. Is that all? Depression can happen to anyone, of course, but her large amount of jealousy of Kasumi feels kinda off in the writing aspect. And since we only get to see Real Kasumi once, ONCE, we don’t know the dynamics of their relationship. She and Cendrillon share only two things: they go to a ball pretending to be someone else and is saved by a man who solves all their problems. Joker saves her by revealing the truth of her identity, and her coming back as Sumire after almost a year of being brainwashed. Though the same can be applied to Maruki as she sort of consented to the identity crisis, and tried to stop Joker from undoing so. And what, after a short timespan when the thieves rescue her she figures herself out and then suddenly accepts Kasumi’s death with a big ole speech? Sure, she talks about it with Joker, and while it’s nice to have someone to talk to about these things, that doesn’t magically solve all of a person’s problems in one fell swoop. Sumire should’ve gone back to therapy with an actual therapist, and talked honestly to her parents about her mental problems. She doesn’t struggle much from being in her own skin again. Joker isn’t the center of her existence! She feels like an imaginary friend from all the times she’s around Joker and no one else. It’s like she ignores them. Having Cendrillon as her Persona just feels like a symbolism of entitlement, considering that her Persona doesn’t change after reclaiming herself as Sumire.

When the game FINALLY reveals what Trash-izawa’s deal is in being a Persona-User in the first place, I’ve already clocked out, exited, lost interest in her reused backstory that the element of surprise failed. To have to go through the main plot (the important part) of the entire game, we had to reach the end with Third Semester to get her reason for being (useless) meaning, to the end, just leaves everything dry. We could’ve gotten to know more about how Maruki’s powers work and what other patients he might have affected. Because is it really believable that he only inflicted Yoshizawa throughout the time he had gotten his Persona?

This chick gives me mixed signals. I can’t tell if she just feels guilty for being the cause of her sister’s death, or that she even misses her, or even that she blames her as an overbearing sibling. You allowed her to be that way! And, isn’t it also because she wanted to become Kasumi so much that found an opportunity to do so deep down?

She’s in loves with Joker no matter what you do. It’s like she doesn’t know what platonic relationships are. It’s like spending time with a guy has to mean romance. Then again, any person but Joker doesn’t exist to her. And who did you love him as exactly, Sumire? Kasumi or you? Because Joker has only ever known Kasumi. To him he’s only just met you. It makes me appreciate Aigis, Rise, and Marie more because they were nothing compared to the level of shoehorning Yoshizawa brings. At least Marie interacts with everyone.

KaSumi/re seems to have the habit of being an overbearing airhead. Everything flies passed her unless it’s about herself. Makes sense for the 10% amount of times she shows up in the game.

Whether it’s Kasumi or Sumire, they’re stalkers regardless. Her following the thieves into Sae’s Palace because she “felt something big was going to happen” is such a poor excuse. What, does everything Joker does have to apply to you? Just how long did you wait in the Palace? Did you have anything to eat? Creep. Her stalking the team in the nurse’s office out of no where was weird. How long have you been tailing them, huh? How did you conveniently find out about their meeting? Answer: there’s no explanation for it. It’s a plot hole players have no problem ignoring like it’s a reasonable thing.

Why does her being skinny while eating a lot matter so much to everyone that it has to be brought up all the time? She’s an athlete, we get it. Ryuji is no different! He’s an athlete for track for track and field!

All Kasumi cares about in this big wide world is gymnastics and nothing else. Sumire’s goal is not too different either. Yet her growth for betterment feels too short for someone who had an identity crisis for almost a year.

KaSumi/re has hardly any stakes as a Phantom thief. She doesn’t even have a reason to join their cause! She didn’t even agree with them that time she met up with Joker and Akechi.

When she said that only the person has to be the one to change their situation, she is literally undermining what happened with the cases of Kamoshida, Madarame, Kaneshiro, Shiro. Their victims were people who couldn’t stand up to them because they were powerless with hardly much choice. Joker, Shiho, Mishima, Ann, Yusuke, etc.

She gives me the same vibes as Marinette Dupen-Chang from Miraculous Ladybug. Who is also not a good character.

Joker, Violet, and Crow are a bizarre team. Her and Crow don’t even have anything in common for their dynamic. Their first meeting was just a shoehorn. It wasn’t necessary, it’s just lazy writing.

Thank gods she isn’t in Strikers, all she’d be was an out of place extra who is unable carry her weight. And she has no motive to even be one of them. Royal’s true ending proves that when she isn’t in the van with the thieves. Guess that goes to show how much of an afterthought she was to Atlus.

Part of me was disappointed that Persona 5 vanilla wasn’t coming to Switch so that I could avoid the pain of dealing with Yoshizawa. At least there’s 3 and 4 to look forward to.

But hey, if you can make reasonable opinions over this then I’ll respect that, and maybe my thoughts of her will be persuaded. Unless you want to be an asshole about free will of opinions and open mindedness then please leave this post now. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ It’s not like this post is a matter of life or death that demands bitchy responses. I draw the line on hate over just having an honest opinion different from others. Especially with any fans of any fanbase, that take things unnecessarily too far. Your love for this character doesn’t give you the right to attack me when I’m only pointing out what I’ve noticed about her and how my personal perspective is affected by those points. And as I’ve stated, I am open to seeing her in a different light, given reasonable and understandable viewpoints without the hostility.

I may continue making these points further. I just had to get this off my chest, even if her fans blast me for my personal opinions that have obvious pointers. Annabeth Chase from the Riordanverse books will eventually become my next rant. She and the “Percabeth” ship had always bothered me since I first read the series as a kid. And growing up, I learned plenty of reasons as to why.

Hello. Are there any characters from pjo you don't write for? Also do you write for HoO characters as well?

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I’ve only just started with Percy because I was the most comfortable with him considering he’s the main character, so that meant I understood his personality the most. He was one of my most memorable childhood crushes since I grew up reading the series (PJO & HoO). The Readers will either have a specified godly parent or not.

I’m not really into writing about females (which is pretty obvious when looking at my masterlists). And to be honest, I’m not the biggest Annabeth fan considering her character, but that’s not the topic we’re focusing on. I am considering on the possibilities of writing for Nico and Jason, (Nico’s would probably have GN Readers instead of me making him bisexual, but I really don’t know). However, I’m still debating about going for it. Of course, my PJO/HoO writing are more demigod oriented, but you’re welcome to ask about any names you’re curious about. Thanks for the question.

Spring’s Touch

A/N: 50-ieth post of this blog. Thank you all for 200+ followers. I hope you may continue enjoying more of my stories.

Fandom(s): Persona 3

P3 Male Protagonist x Fem Reader

Summary: You spend some time resting under a tree, just enjoying spring’s warmth. Having your quiet leader by your side makes it even better.

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Content: Fluff, romance, established relationship, napping, sleeping, reading, Arsène Lupin reference, comfort, no hurt comfort.

Warnings: None.

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Your eyes are closed as your mind drifts off, basking in the gentle breeze. The lap your head is lying on is warm, including the hand that is gently caressing your hair, brushing any invading strand away.

Minato is holding a book with one hand, focusing on its contents as his earphones play his music. There’s a relaxed expression on the blue haired teen’s face. It may not be so noticeable for people who don’t know him well, but you can easily spot such a visage.

With a sigh you turn to face him, a single cheek pressing his thighs. Slowly opening your gaze, your tired eyes naturally look up to see the blue haired male in all his glory. You can’t help but admire his current state, where he wasn’t burdened by his endless tasks.

“Minato..?” you softly murmur, voice drowsy.

His eyes calmly went over to you, still just as at peace as when he was zoned in on his own world. Minato’s hand doesn’t stop petting your head.

“Can you read to me a little bit?”

A small smile spreads his lips, gaze soft. As much as he wasn’t a talker unless necessary, he was easily swayed for you.

”All right.” nodded Minato. “Then I’ll start where I left off?”

”That’s fine.” you lazily beam at him, eyes getting ready to close again.

“‘It was indeed, the famous necklace, the legendary necklace that Bohmer and Bassenge…’”

Minato’s mellow tone continues to ring in the air, returning you to your peaceful slumber.

𝙋𝙀𝙍𝙎𝙊𝙉𝘼 3 | 𝐏𝟑 𝐌𝐚𝐥𝐞 𝐏𝐫𝐨𝐭𝐚𝐠𝐨𝐧𝐢𝐬𝐭 𝐌𝐚𝐬𝐭𝐞𝐫𝐥𝐢𝐬𝐭

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Rᴇɢᴀʀᴅɪɴɢ Rᴇᴏ̨ᴜᴇsᴛs [ ʀᴜʟᴇs [ ʀᴇǫᴜᴇsᴛs ᴏᴘᴇɴ ] ]

𝗨𝗽𝗱𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗱: 𝟵/𝟭𝟰/𝟮𝟯

𝕆𝕟𝕖-𝕤𝕙𝕠𝕥𝕤:

To Be Released.

𝔻𝕣𝕒𝕓𝕓𝕝𝕖𝕤:

Spring’s Touch

Pairing(s): x Fem Reader

You spend some time resting under a tree, just enjoying spring’s warmth. Having your quiet leader by your side makes it even better.

Content: Fluff, romance, established relationship, napping, sleeping, reading, Arsène Lupin reference, comfort, no hurt comfort.

Warnings: None.

A Love By Hand *Requested

Pairing(s): x Fem Reader

As you stay together, you finally finish up on making something for your boyfriend.

Content: Fluff, romance, established relationship, comfort, soft P3 Protagonist, domesticity, cuddling & snuggling, knitting.

Warnings: None.

More To Be Released.

ℍ𝕖𝕒𝕕𝕔𝕒𝕟𝕠𝕟𝕤:

To Be Released.

𝕄𝕚𝕟𝕚-𝕤𝕖𝕣𝕚𝕖𝕤:

To Be Released.

ℙ𝕣𝕠𝕞𝕡𝕥𝕤(𝕒𝕟𝕪):

To Be Released.

That’s a funny coincidence, actually. I had this precise scenario drafted for a long time now and hadn’t decided on when I’d be able to finish it. I made it into two parts: one with Joker and the other with Reader. But I can turn it into a request no problem.

Hello. Sorry for my late response, i’ve been quite sick recently and just didn’t have the energy. Anyways, as for my writing blog I am not focused on one fandom for the most part. I like fluff bc it’s easy and i don’t mind angst. Though since i like writing hcs the most idc what im writing. I suppose if the form is easy everything else comes together. But my personal favourite is hurt/comfort (reader giving, character receiving) and some good bittersweet romance. I guess that's mostly bc I like writing for my faves and I can't see them in a 100% healthy relationships for the most part, at least when canon takes place. That has me curious - what relationship dynamics do you like to write? And what tropes do you like your x readers to fall into?

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Well I’m making a late response myself, I’ve been busy caught up in other things. I definitely prefer writing healthy relationships. I’m not into the dark ones: manipulation, gaslighting, toxicity, etc, sure it’s a part of real life but that doesn’t mean it’s good or morally/ethically right for anyone.

And my tropes just tend to go with what I want to do, though writing a slow burn, for example, would be hard because I wouldn’t have that much patience. I’m not into the enemies-to-lovers and forced proximity trope. I like that my character list fits into the open minded category that doesn’t go against their personalities. The star-crossed lovers shtick isn’t my thing either, though I don’t mind the angst so long as there’s a happy ending, but I’m not sure I could pull off writing something like that smoothly. There’s a lot of don’t’s here but it’s a start of what I stand by.