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Chapter Four: The True
Chapter Four: The true
Yes I’m back with other chapter! I’m not sick anymore which is great! But during my time of being sick I was not able to eat nothing or a whole bunch of food and I also went sleep deprived so I had to force myself to sleep which is great! Not a lot of interesting things happened yet but the only thing interesting is happening that I’m going to a camp for a week so chapters will be coming out late again! It’s that great sorry for keeping you waiting for all this time again! But now enjoy this amazing chapter that I made for you all! ENJOY READERS
This chapter is unfinished and I will finish it soon because I just have low motivation to get it done :)
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"And that's the gospel truth." They all sang together. They move out of the way and there is a painting of sheep and hills and trees. The sheep were eating grass from the hills.
The sun shines in the sky, the sheep are eating the fresh grass on the ground and there is a dirt path in the middle of the hill. Then a wooden wheelbarrow with haystacks on it went flying down the dirt pathway heading straight towards the market that is down hill. In front of the wheelbarrow is Hua Cheng sitting and a donkey with a broken ankle and Lang Qianqiu who is pulling the wheelbarrow with his strength. "Lang Qianqiu! Slow down!" Hua Cheng told him while holding his hat that was on his head. When they reached the market there were three men on top of the entire building entrance. "Look out!" Hua Cheng told Lang while pointing at the man. "Oops! S-Sorry guys!" Lang apologized with a nervous tone while going through the entire way.
"Hey! Watch where you're going!" A random person said to Lang while he was pulling the wheelbarrow. "Sunday driver." Another person said under their breath. People in the crowd are screaming because of Lang's not so good driving skills. Then he stopped the wheelbarrow and now he is stuck in a hole that he made while stopping the wheelbarrow that he was pulling. "Thanks son." Hua Cheng told Lang while he got out of the hole and sighed. "Where old Penelope twisted her ankle back there...I thought we were done for." He told his son while looking at the donkey's ankle. Lang Qianqiu walked towards the wheelbarrow and began lifting up the stack of hay. "No problem Pop." Lang told his father.
"Uh don't unload just yet," he told Lang. "First I have to finagle with Yin Yu." He explained to Lang Qianqiu. "Okay." Lang replied and put down the stack of back on the back of the wheelbarrow. Lang walked towards Hua Cheng and Hua Cheng began to speak to Lang before he left to talk to Yin Yu. "Now Lang this time please just." He began to explain to Lang Qianqiu. "I know I know.." Lang sighed. "Stay by the cart." Lang agreed sadly then Hua Cheng rubbed Lang's hair. "That's my boy." He exclaimed and walked away. There is a young man with a big pot that has the most beautiful design on it. ¨Oh my goodness! Whoa!¨ The man said to themself under their breath while almost falling backwards. ¨Careful!¨ Said Lang while he helped the young man with the pot with his hands on the bottom of it. ¨Why thank you.¨said the young man to the person that helped him and it was unknown that the person who helped him was Lang Qianqiu until he spoke. ¨No problem!¨ replied Lang. ¨W-why Lang qianqiu!¨ The young man sputtered. ¨It is you!¨ He finished his words. ¨Let me help you with that.¨ Lang offers the young man. ¨No no no no. I got it!¨ he told Lang then he turned around and went away from him and this shocked Lang then tried to help him again ¨ I'm fine! You just run along Lang now Lang.¨ He said, trying to get Lang to leave. ¨Are you sure?¨ Lang questioned him then he nodded. ¨Oh yes. Absolutely!¨ He told him and Lang left the room and the young man closed the long red curtain and Lang was standing there when he closed it. Lang began to walk away then disc appeared and fell on the ground next to his foot he bent down and grabbed the disc then he went back to standing up straight once again. ¨Yo! Give it here!¨ A random kid said while running towards him then he gasped when he saw who got his disc and some of his friends were behind him. ¨Hey..you need an extra guy?" He asked them if they wanted to play with them. ¨humm.¨ said the blonde kid. ¨Sorry Lang.¨ The blonde kid told him while rubbing the back of his neck. ¨But we already got five. We want to keep it an even number.¨ He told Lang. ¨Hey..wait a second. Five isn't an even.¨ Lang said he didn't get a chance to finish what he's about to say, so the blonde kid took the disc from his hand and ran away from him. ¨See ya Lang.¨ the blonde kid said and one of his friends said this to him.¨What a geek.¨ ¨Destructo boy!.¨ one of them said while laughing then another one said this.¨Maybe we should started calling him jerking!¨They all laugh together.
Lang walked away from them with his head looking at the ground while looking at his feet and sighed with sadness in his eyes then slowly looked up and sat down at the well that is somewhat in the middle of the market that he and his Father is at. Then the disc was flying in the air and Lang looked up and saw it. "Head up!" Said a random boy and Lang got up and ran towards the disc and tried to catch it. "I got it!" Lang said then jumped in the air to get the disc but failed and his body slammed on to the pillar. "No! Stop!" Said another kid but it was late. Lang crashed into a tall white pillar face first and fell down back on the ground making it crack underneath him.
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Sneak peak of the updated version of chapter four
when that happened all the other pillars began to collapse. The pillars were falling down and people and the animals were running away from the falling pillars trying not to get hurt. Lang threw the other pillar on the other side where those pillars haven’t fallen yet then Lang began running to the other side then he stopped and said. “Hey! Whoa!” In shocked and worried in his tone as he saw the pillars falling like ones on the other side. Lang ran past Xie Lian. “Lang!” Xie Lian called for him and lang responded with “Hang on! Pop! I be right back!” Lang explained to him and to continue to run past him.
“No no! Oh my! Don’t please!! No no!” The young men said in worried and scared voice while holding his pots in his hands then pillars stopped for a moment by but..Lang comes running towards him. “Watch out!” Lang warned him then spilled on oil that was on the floor then crashing into him breaking all of the pots that were in the young man hands and the pillars finally fell down.
Still in the making :3
Chapter Four: The truth( updated version ) pt1/2
Hello I'm back again! It been six days since I last updated the book/story my reason is that I went sick I got better then I have camp went ended on Thursday went was not that long ago before camp ended I started to get shoulder pain on both of my shoulders and some pain on both of my arms and I didn't tell my mom yet...so she didn't know ooops and I went to the doctor on Thursday the same day where it was the last day at camp which I have to miss because of my doctor appointment and there was some stuff that happened there and it a lot but it wasn't about my medical condition but something else and after all that I'm here giving you the update version of chapter four the truth! In this chapter Lang Qianqiu will found out the truth that his Parents were keeping away from him and this is the start of his hero path with a help with some people on the way as well and who are these people you may asked? Well you just have to wait and see! Enjoy this chapter that is probably going to take awhile to finish lol! :)
(A/N just imagine that instead of He Cheng being there it Xie Lian because it makes more sense and I don't have the time and energy to replace all of the words that say He Cheng so you just got to use your imagination I just want to change it because it felt right to and it fitted his character more than He Cheng because when I first started I didn't really think much to it until know so yeah but in the future I will got back and fixed it:) )
And sorry for a really late update version of chapter four lack of motivation and other important things happening(aka both of my shoulders have pain in them for something days idk how long but they don't hurt anymore they is refreshing! Enjoy this wonderful chapter that I made!
Here’s the chapter you been waiting for @purplew :3
"And that's the gospel truth." They all sang together. They move out of the way and there is a painting of wonderful colors to make a beautiful sheep, hills, and trees while looking at it almost can tell if can actually believe that you looking at a real sheep, hills, and trees just by looking at the painting. The sheep were eating grass from the hills and they are next to dirt road.
(A/N I decided to add some more things to my likening)
The sun shines in the sky, the sheep are eating the fresh grass on the ground and there is a dirt path in the middle of the hill. Then a wooden wheelbarrow with haystacks on it went flying down the dirt pathway heading straight towards the market that is down hill. In front of the wheelbarrow is Hua Cheng sitting and a donkey with a broken ankle and Lang Qianqiu who is pulling the wheelbarrow with his strength. "Lang Qianqiu! Slow down!" Hua Cheng told him while holding his hat that was on his head. When they reached the market there were three men on top of the entire building entrance. "Look out!" Hua Cheng told Lang while pointing at the man. "Oops! S-Sorry guys!" Lang apologized with a nervous tone while going through the entire way.
"Hey! Watch where you're going!" A random person said to Lang while he was pulling the wheelbarrow. "Sunday driver." Another person said under their breath. People in the crowd are screaming because of Lang's not so good driving skills. Then he stopped the wheelbarrow and now he is stuck in a hole that he made while stopping the wheelbarrow that he was pulling. "Thanks son." Hua Cheng told Lang while he got out of the hole and sighed. "Where old Penelope twisted her ankle back there...I thought we were done for." He told his son while looking at the donkey's ankle. Lang Qianqiu walked towards the wheelbarrow and began lifting up the stack of hay. "No problem Pop." Lang told his father.
"Uh don't unload just yet," he told Lang. "First I have to finagle with Yin Yu." He explained to Lang Qianqiu. "Okay." Lang replied and put down the stack of back on the back of the wheelbarrow. Lang walked towards Hua Cheng and Hua Cheng began to speak to Lang before he left to talk to Yin Yu. "Now Lang this time please just." He began to explain to Lang Qianqiu. "I know I know.." Lang sighed. "Stay by the cart." Lang agreed sadly then Hua Cheng rubbed Lang's hair. "That's my boy." He exclaimed and walked away. There is a young man with a big pot that has the most beautiful design on it. ¨Oh my goodness! Whoa!¨ The man said to themself under their breath while almost falling backwards. ¨Careful!¨ Said Lang while he helped the young man with the pot with his hands on the bottom of it. ¨Why thank you.¨said the young man to the person that helped him and it was unknown that the person who helped him was Lang Qianqiu until he spoke. ¨No problem!¨ replied Lang. ¨W-why Lang qianqiu!¨ The young man sputtered. ¨It is you!¨ He finished his words. ¨Let me help you with that.¨ Lang offers the young man. ¨No no no no. I got it!¨ he told Lang then he turned around and went away from him and this shocked Lang then tried to help him again ¨ I'm fine! You just run along Lang now Lang.¨ He said, trying to get Lang to leave. ¨Are you sure?¨ Lang questioned him then he nodded. ¨Oh yes. Absolutely!¨ He told him and Lang left the room and the young man closed the long red curtain and Lang was standing there when he closed it. Lang began to walk away then disc appeared and fell on the ground next to his foot he bent down and grabbed the disc then he went back to standing up straight once again. ¨Yo! Give it here!¨ A random kid said while running towards him then he gasped when he saw who got his disc and some of his friends were behind him. ¨Hey..you need an extra guy?" He asked them if they wanted to play with them. ¨humm.¨ said the blonde kid. ¨Sorry Lang.¨ The blonde kid told him while rubbing the back of his neck. ¨But we already got five. We want to keep it an even number.¨ He told Lang. ¨Hey..wait a second. Five isn't an even.¨ Lang said he didn't get a chance to finish what he's about to say, so the blonde kid took the disc from his hand and ran away from him. ¨See ya Lang.¨ the blonde kid said and one of his friends said this to him.¨What a geek.¨ ¨Destructo boy!.¨ one of them said while laughing then another one said this.¨Maybe we should started calling him jerking!¨They all laugh together.
Lang walked away from them with his head looking at the ground while looking at his feet and sighed with sadness in his eyes then slowly looked up and sat down at the well that is somewhat in the middle of the market that he and his Father is at. Then the disc was flying in the air and Lang looked up and saw it. "Head up!" Said a random boy and Lang got up and ran towards the disc and tried to catch it. "I got it!" Lang said then jumped in the air to get the disc but failed and his body slammed on to the pillar. "No! Stop!" Said another kid but it was late. Lang crashed into a tall white pillar face first and fell down back on the ground making it crack underneath him.
Lang Qianqiu got up quickly and grabbed on to the pillar to stop it from falling down he took a step back and the roof that the pillar was holding fall down and Lang turned his body and the other pillar began to fall as well when Lang was trying to hold the other in place in his hands and there is a hole on it the other pillar making it crashed when that happened all the other pillars began to collapse. The pillars were falling down and people and the animals were running away from the falling pillars trying not to get hurt. Lang threw the other pillar on the other side where those pillars haven't fallen yet then Lang began running to the other side then he stopped and said. "Hey! Whoa!" In shocked and worried in his tone as he saw the pillars falling like ones on the other side. Lang ran past Xie Lian. "Lang!" Xie Lian called for him and lang responded with "Hang on! Pop! I be right back!" Lang explained to him and to continue to run past him.
"No no! Oh my! Don't please!! No no!" The young men said in worried and scared voice while holding his pots in his hands then pillars stopped for a moment by but..Lang comes running towards him. "Watch out!" Lang warned him then spilled on oil that was on the floor then crashing into him breaking all of the pots that were in the young man hands and the pillars finally fell down. Smoke filled the air and when it cleaned everything was destroyed and there was broken pots on the ground and oils spilled on the ground and everything was just a mess it will take forever to clean up. Lang was standing there looking around at all the mess that he chase just for trying to catch the dis, he pick up the dis that is next to his foot and Xie Lian walked towards him slowly then the blonde kid came running up to Lang while Lang just looked at him with disappointment look on his face about everything that happened just because of him. "Nice catch. Jerklang." The blonde kid told him with dissatisfaction and anger in his tone then taking the dis out of his hands and walked away from him."Lang..." Xie Lian said to him with sadness in his voice then a crowd began to form and they began to mumble hurtful things about Lang Qianqiu about events that happened today. "That's the last straw! XIE LIAN!" The young man said in anger while getting out of the piles of pots he was stuck in and his face is covered in red in anger. He now walking towards him with anger in his eyes while slammed the pot on the ground breaking turned into one piece into a multi pieces on the ground now. "That boy is a beast!" Said a woman pointed at the young boy. "He's too dangerous to be here!" Another one said. "He can't be around here!" A man said. "He cant be around us normal people anymore!" A old woman said.
"He didn't mean any harm!" Xie Lian told them. "He's just a kid!" Xie Lian tried to reason with the people. "He just can't control his strength." He explained to them while having his hand on his Lang back. The young man walked up to him s face. "I'm warning you Xie Lian." He told him while pointing his finger at him. "You keep that..that freak! Away from here!" He explained in anger and tried of the Lang Qianqiu always causing chaos with his strength. "Yeah! Freak! Go away!" A young boy said excitedly and the crowd agreed with the young man that is in front of Xie Lian and Lang Qianqiu is looking at him with honor on his face and eyebrows raised and his eyes wide open while the anger crowd shouted negative comments and words then the anger crowd began walking away leaving a sad Lang Qianqiu and a worried Xie Lian.
The sky is mixed with red, orange, and yellow as the sun sets in the sky and there is two people sitting on a hill with trees surrounding them and the area that they sitting have fees trees near them. The adult has an arm around the kid shoulder while sitting under a tree shadow blocking them from the sun light. Xie Lian sighed and turned his head towards Lang and his mouth began to open ready to talk to him. "Lang...don't let the things they said about you back there in your head." He speaks softly to him. "But.." Lang Qianqiu said before stopping to get up from where his sitting and now standing up looking at him bed continuing speaking. "Pop! They...they're right! I am a freak! I to fit in I really do! B-But it never works.." he explained to him while looking at the ground having his hands in a fists. "The outcome is always." He's hands stills in fits his voice changing in tone to a sad, dissatisfied, and painful voice. He turned around facing away from him then looks at the sky then at the ground. "Sometimes I-I feel like I don't fit in! At all! I don't belong here..." explains now facing Xie Lian. "Like I'm supposed be somewhere else...a place that accepts me you know." He continued to talking. Then Xie Lian got up and walked towards him. "Lang qianqiu...." He said then placing a hand on his shoulder Lang walked away from him then he sighed. "I know it doesn't make any sense..." He said to him before walking away. (A/N teenagers am I right? This a joke.) Xie Lian only looked at him with sadness in his face before sighing.
(A/N Lang Qianqiu having his Disney moment take this a joke I joke around about a lot of things and this is one of them luv u)
Lang Qianqiu is walking to the edge of a cliff looking a ocean as the colorful sky hits the horizon the wind blowing his hair while bent down and take the rock of the ground then looking back at the ocean."I have often dreamed of a far off place." Lang Qianqiu begins singing in a soft tone in his voice while he throws the rock into the ocean and the rock skip on the ocean making small circles on the water. "Where a great, warm welcome will be waiting for me." He sang while closing his eyes and raising his arms like a bird opening their wings getting ready to fly then he opened his eyes once again and put his arms close to his chest then putting them back on his sides. "Where the crowds will cheer when they see my face."His voice began to raise as he sing. "And a voice keeps sayin this is where I'm meant to be." The voice still remained calm while he sings. Now it's dark out and the moon is up in the sky and Lang Qianqiu is walking in the woods. "I will find my way." He continues to sing while walking in the dark woods. "I can go~ the distance!" Lang Qianqiu sang once more. Then he climb a huge and tall tree while singing. "I'll be there someday." Then he grabbed the next branch of the tree as he continued to climb up the tree. "If I can be strong." He smiled. Then he stand on a huge branch of the tree. "I know every mile." He continued singing while on the tree branch looking at the moon that is in the sky while the stars dance in the sky.
"Will be worth my while." He sang calmly then he put his hand on the main tree then a shooting star come by. "I would go most anywhere to feel like I...belong~"
(A/N this short ahhh paragraph)
Lang Qianqiu is now down from the tree and he have his head low and looking at the ground while walking towards a house that is where He Cheng and Xie Lian is standing at the door and where the candle is light up inside the house. Lmag qianqiu stops in front of the house and He Cheng began to speak up. "Lang Qianqiu." He told him while looking towards him while having his arm around Xie Lian and he has a hand in his chest.(A/N if feels a little bit rushed I'm sorry if it does) "There is something that me and gege wants to tell you for a long time." He says then looking down at Xie Lian then back at Lang Qianqiu who is some feet away from the door and is just standing there. They are now inside the house Xie Lian and Lang Qianqiu are sitting down next to each other with space between them and Xe Cheng is standing up in front of them and the fire place is light up lighting up the house. "But if you found me...then where did I came from?" He asked them then looking up at He Cheng. "And why was I left here?" He continued to asked them questions then he looked at Xie Lian who is next to them. Xie Lian took out a something that is covering it up and began unwrapping it when he finished unwrapping it there is golden metal with a red ribbon on it so it can go the person neck. He gave him it and began to speak. "This was around your neck when we found you. When you were a baby." He explained. Lang Qianqiu look at it and rubbed his finger against the golden metal He Cheng walked around behind them and placed his hand on his hand on Xie Lian shoulder and rubbing his finger against the shoulder. "It's the symbol of the gods." Xie Lian explained to him. Lang Qianqiu got up from his seat quickly. "This is it!" Lang explained happily. "Don't you see? Maybe they will have the answers!" He told them exactly then turned to his them with a huge smile on his face.(A/N it already 3k words I probably will go over that if so I might be finished by midnight or in the morning. I guess I'm pulling all nighter if that happens nah I'm going to end it here)
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I hope you enjoyed this cliffhanger everyone! It been a long and crazy ride for me before I even started working on updating the four chapter because a lot of stuff happened that I explained already so you know everything about what happened before this chapter was out.
And I wanna hear your thoughts on this chapter so tell me in the comments and don't be shy to tell me about my grammar mistakes and I will got back and fix them in the future
And on the next chapter there will be a mini chapter about He Cheng and Xie Lian but I won't tell you about the mini chapter you just have to wait and see for yourself in the chapter. P.s while making the chapter I was listening to some sad TikTok edit audios and I close to crying but I stop listening to them and got back working on this chapter!
Total of how long it took me to finish this chapter: jul 15 to jul 17 11:33 pm
Whoa that's a lot see you all next time bye
I found a video one day and it made me cry not because of the video being sad cause it was not but because of thumbnail and it made me think about all my life decisions that I made
I need help
#why #dont worry I’m find
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Update
Hello everyone who are waiting for the complete chapter four of Qiurong! It in the making I make sure I get it done soon I don’t know when but it will get done promise it might take some hours or some days I really don’t know when it depends how much I want to be 1k words or over that tbh it really depends how long I want to be but anyway I will get posted soon sorry for keeping everyone waiting:(